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恩，这里你可以找一下有没有（底下勾上ＡＩＲ点提交）

http://www.keyfc.net/bbs/showtop ... ewtopic=600&forums=

还有这里也可以参考一下？

http://baike.baidu.com/view/4449.htm?fr=ala0_1_1#1

想用这个写英语作业？乃是想要宣传AIR么？那么咱非常支持啊，加油加油！ＦＩＧＨＴ！

This is the birds and the sea, the divine poem

This is a child of the wings and the sky, guarding the song

This is the fate and happy to chase the fuqu.

Quiet seaside town, all the fate of the girls, a thousand years of man, life last summer ... all in the bird's poetry melody down tightly together, looking at the sky, the dazzle of the summer ... remember, the day of the summer ...
   

Dreaming with magical girls are taking note of the maximum mana is near ...
                                                                                                                  — Message memory of Kirishima Jia is

A cool summer, right hand never took off around the yellow ribbons, always followed by unknown star of the potato-like. In the face of what can laugh laughter, smiles infected with the small town of all people. Icy sister also only in the face of her will reveal rare smile, smile, but also behind true sorrow ...

If 18-year-old will never come, she may be able to always go for such a smile, she may never see a yellow ribbon round the following ugly scars. Over the years, the yellow ribbon is her hopes, her with a dream-a dream to rely on the power of magic again mother side yellow ribbon is the magic key. But magic is not because the better the 18 years, revealing the Ribbon does not give you the magic, but they ripped a long history of men dying — another mother's painful experience ...

Jia is Ah, you probably should have realized that your story and the story of the mother is so much alike. The mother is like your sister, was brought up by my side no-care of you, never abandon you. Faced with the multitude of confusion, but it bears all the face you always with a smile, as you do it all in silence ... you know, my sister did not deceive you, magic is generated, you should already see the dream of a mother, her name is called the Kirishima St.

Parental care is perfectly justified, but we also want to experience, to cherish happiness ...-preferred is the end of the article.
无奈的翻译机版本...
自己一句句写吧还是...

http://www.keyfc.net/bbs/showtopic-16101.aspx
上吧~~上吧~~我們的5F深海藍空最厲害了~~

This is the birds and the sea, the divine poem

This is a child of the wings and the sky, guarding the song

This is the fate and happy to chase the canon

Quiet seaside town, all the fate of the girls, a marionette
through thousands of years, the last summer of the life ... all above is in the melody of bird's poetry ,and down together tightly... looking at the sky, the dazzle of the summer ... remember, the day of the summer ...



sky 's child- Kamio Misuzu
there is no need for me to do more, besides your experience of AIR growing ,you will love this girl who is misted but has lovely sights and strange hobby .The V-shaped hand gesture, every smile, all of these are staying deeply in our hearts .Even the firm is fake, we will encourage the little girl. Even years later, remember the original touch, no regrets for our youth, no regrets for the lost time, thick juice, strange port, will not gone with time. With the eternal, everlasting moments. "I end with happiness", girl’s words still remain in our hearts, this is the move that the shy’s child bring to me.

goddess with falling stars- Tohno Minagi
if there is anyone in AIR can bring us the fantasy feelings, she must be Minagi.
The slowly slowly words, elegant manners, just like a goddess with falling star. beautifully, outstanding, But there was a secrect history with such a perfect girl. Her happiness, her dreams…all of these has been replaced by the fragments of memories. Dreams, just like the smoke in the air, someday, face the reality ,with the smiling brave face ,welcome the happy ending together.

The fate of the翼人- kannabi no mikoto
destiny is tragic, even assuming the planet's memory ,the fate has no changes, again and again. kannabi as the last 翼人, in the infinite space, confusing in the lonely eternal dream . after thousands of years, the ending point has been written completely by Misuzu . This is the sequel , and it's the end.

the theory of missing- Kirishima Kano
in front of the temple, when the balloon filled with her missing flying into the sky ,the lonely feeling inside her heart filled out. feathers of 1, white memory…With the bright beautiful light , mother and daughter meet again , goodbye, without sadness but brought her happiness, facing the bright tomorrow.


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我自己翻的...
果然还是想要点文学性...
先翻着打发打发时间吧...来不及了再用蓝空公主的那个...
大家帮忙订正一下吧...